Well done.
I understand what some others are saying about the animation, but you are up and coming. Some of the animation loops, like the guard's arm, were very impressive and lifelike. Animating speech is tough, and I think you did well for the little that was done. Voice acting was fine. And everything will grow with time. Oh, and great use of the music coming in and out depending on his headphones being on or off. Neat.
Nice
I like this flash, and the character really reminds me of Beat, from Jet Set radio series. Yeah, the voice acting could of been better, but -shrugs- It's fine to me.
The whole story itself seems to remind me of JSR, but it's nice to see a similar futuristic style with a different plot.
I hope you get an A with that work~ x3
REALLY Good!
Nooooo!! Don't end it like that! I want to see what happens next! This was really good and you should be proud of your work. The techno music set just the right mood and I love the main protagonist of the flash. I hope to see a lot more of him (and Solar City) in the future! :D
Very cool!
What a great action scene! liked the perspective when miles was breaking through the window, quite creative. The animation was fantastic as well, it flowed very nicly and looked clear and crisp with detail. The main improvement it needs is the voice-acting tho, it sounds kinda corny and not a lot of emotion put into it :/
Overall: 9/10 hope to see a sequel to this!
cool but,
nine because the monsters are called skeeters, which sounds...reatarted, and the voice acting was off.