Reviews for Solar City

[Polimeris]

Could start a nice SF

You hit a fine balance between story and action. It has this exciting feeling of "this could really happen in future" you can find in good SF books.
The "hero" is extra strong and has lightning reflexes, but he raises questions among normal people because he seems crazy (and certainly is !).
The "hero" does slightly impossible actions. Enough to let the viewer think "amazing" yet being plausible because of the headphones.

Apart from that, animation is correct, even if art lacks a bit. Sounds fit nicely. And again, I think your best achievement with this flash is this nice plausibility feeling.

[ultaman78]

Very good! but...

I think that it could have been a little longer.

[Catalyste]

So this was the first part...

Or was this it?
I've always felt that oneshot shorts like these should be clear enough for the audience so you won't have to describe the important bits in the description field.

See I read about the music helping him battle when I read this on the front page, so I was wondering when in the short he was going to explain that portion as well as his involvement with the current story.

This has room for more installments. If you decide to do more, it would be nice to have a backstory on those headphones.

But nice work.

[Semja]

Cool concept, but poor voice acting

Voice acting should probably be done by someone else. Also, you spelled brake as break - should probably fix that, and make the sequel more original.

Lythero responds:

lawl, thanks for pointing that out

[jumpybrik]

ugh

nice but really short.