Wtf happened!?
tthe first one was an 8,the second one was a 9,but this one was just a flat out 4!I cringed at how you handled the third installment of this series and thought you could've improved it.guess I was wrong.
Out of all the cliche anime things you couldve chose to pick on,you chose maybe a few that couldnt be as great as some other very cliche anime stuff..big boner kill was what this turned out to be.the voice acting was terrible,but it was meant to be so you did a great job on that.the animation was amazing,but didnt have an anime feel to it.the jokes were very stale to the point where ken star says his catch phrase very vague.The fight between the characters about dying early felt forced and awkward along with the twins and swirly glasses,and the end just had me not wanting to see more if this was the direction its heading in.
just on another thing,the fact that the know-it-all had guns and was capping people just ruined what you were aiming for.it was metal gear awesome meets girl chan..which of course is for the loss.
I hope that if you make another episode,you model it off of episode 2,because that episode is where I felt you struck gold .I understand you wanted to change things up and use different jokes and humor,but when its supposed to be an anime jabbing anime:yeah animes can get loopy,but its blatanly obvious when and the places it was applied in this episode was just sad man because it didn't blend well at all.not to mention 75% of the humor in this episode was forced/rushed and you just dont do that because then it just gets awkward and you get that "uh...heh" feeling like a nervous chuckle one gives when a gun is pointed at them
Good luck to you and your future projects :)