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Reviews for "Girlchan in Paradise Ep3"

I shouldn't have had my hopes that high

I will say this. The greatest parody by far that you have made that makes it watch more than once had got to be Girl Chan. The first episode wasn't that bad. The second was more improved and better. This one... was just a bit disappointing. Literally half the entire middle was nothing than two characters arguing. This actually reminded me of an episode of Family guy, which also isn't too special. Obviously your parodying anime, but this looks like you did more copying family guy joke techniques more than parodying of the anime itself. Than in the second half, we see more talking and talking, and the gun reference is also a bit too familiar.

No offense to you Ego, but for several months your jokes and style are, I wouldn't say lowering, but its just getting stale. You should try to come up with a little more fresh and new. Again, this third episode was also disappointing because its the same voices we hear in your other flashes like Literal and Transformers, and the jokes and style is so similar to them that it makes this just rehashed.

The second girlchan had improved art and voicing, but this one looked like you rushed it a bit too much, since half the entire show was just zooming in on the characters with tweening mouth moving animation.

Again, I was a bit interested in this series, but this episode of the three was probably less expected by far. Try a bit better. I know you can improve.

Boring

I tried to give the best constructive criticism as I can. I am kind of disappointed in egoraptor. None of the stuff where he excels in doestn't exist in this episode. The jokes are not funny. Randomness is here and there, there is little substance to the plot. Perhaps this episode will entertain the original fans but I doubt this could bring in more audience. Time for change.

I don't get it.

How is this funny?

such a shame...

This series is terrible, i appreciate the satire of poorly dubbed anime, but in all honesty, you could have been done with this in one episode, there was zero fresh material in this, and was there actually meant to be any jokes? if there was i completely missed them, its a terrible shame because I love a lot of your works, especially the awesome series, and even your collab works, but this series is such a squandering of your abilities, please don't make any more, another metal gear awesome would be a far better use of your time :-P

Humour = 0 - didnt find any humour other than the repeated satire
Art = 3 - classic egoraptor art style, functional and pleasing
Actionscripting = 0 - no ending, just a loop, some links, nothing really there
Voice acting = 1 - the massive voice actor argument in the middle really annoyed me, i think the only thing i give a point here for was the girls voices, they were well performed (assumed performed by you or Josh as no girls were credited)

AHAHA

Somebody pls tell me this to funny? Or am I the only one?