Yea to the douches under me
That gave a 1 and a 4 you can go to hell I enjoyed this greatly. It was magnificent, the final note on the tree struck home for me honestly seeing as i never knew my father. I appreciate the direction you took with this and the time spent on it. The animation itself count have been better like when the people turned the porportions changed dramatically but otherwise youve got a nice video here. Good luck on future projects.
Thanks for the review, im glad you liked it!
great story
while having good art and animation skills help, i think the story is what's most important. I thought the plot moved along well and was fairly easy to understand and the twist at the end was a great touch to an already good story that is easy to relate to if you have ever had a dream that nobody seems to understand.
Good to see people connect with the story, thanks for the review!
nice message
Animation was nice i thought, and it did keep my attention, clearly some people have the attention span of a goldfish. But i thought it was a good submission, keep up the good work, maybe work on the audio, was a bit too quiet at times, but still a fine submission :)
Glad you liked it, and yeah i agrea about the audio, might update it...
Good
(8.5) It was good but why are the drawings so grainie, all i can think of is that you turned the smoothnes down to nothing, anyways good animation, good story, sept it was a bit of a gay dream, + if i wanted to fly i would ov mande some Mechanical wings or somin, but hey thats just me,
Good work man!!!!
Yup i turned the smoothness to 0. I just dont like how it changes what you draw when you turn it up...
But thanks for the tips!
wow!! what a nice story, i love the whole animation in general.
(I am a drawer, trying to learn flash animation) I can see that the drawings need some work because it help in the animation, but the story really rock and that stole my attention. You can have amazing drawings and if the story is bad, the animation sucks (my personal opinion). Of course It doesn't mean that you wouldn't try to improve your drawing skill, but I consider that the whole animation was interesting. I like the how you play with different camera angle placing the camera in different location. You have potential as an animator. Well done!!
Thank you for the kind words!