Reviews for Worlds End Umbrella

[XwaynecoltX]

Interesting story

~~REVIEW~~
I really like how you gave this story some good depth to it the animation seemed to be alright the character cats were notbad either allthough you could have gave the cats abit more effort like more facial design and more shots based on them like some close up sand such, really for the most part of this flash it was about the story, and thats what i really liked about it, more effort on the characters next time though, in the end this was a very captivating story right into the end aswell, some improving would be like in the scene when the cats are running and you have the sunset in the backround the "TAILS" didnt move there you should make it so they are since they are running and all, anyways nice story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation to the cats like arms tails and such

~~OVERALL~~
A cute story very pleasent to have seen

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k3ltr0n responds:

THANKS!

[GOMORMONS]

Nothing specail

Some constructive criticism. First the criticizing. The graphics and animation were lack luster, nothing amazing and pretty basic, I'm no artist and I would never claim to be, but i think i know the difference between a masterpiece and a work in progress. Now, the constructive side. You have decent ideas for a plot and the wording seems mysterious and maybe almost poetic. The storyline needs to be beefed up a bit, it's very vague and a viewer doesn't know where anything is going. Thank you for submitting it.

[zerocreativity]

yes

yes... yes!!

[Smiley-Bob]

I love it.

Simply beautiful. Very good music and very entertaining visuals. Although the art and animation wasn't the most complicated I've ever seen it was still thoroughly enjoyable. Well done!

[someplaceelse]

Nice1

I love the color, the catchy tune, and the story. The art was pretty cool, and the animations was good as well. I actually like this. :)