Looked Great!...but
You brought me into your world and it looked quite amazing. The style was similar to Adam Phillips but that's not something to gripe about since it's a great look.
What you lacked really was story or ANY clarifications for that matter.
When Adam Phillips brings you into Brackenwood he displays all the character's mannerisms before they interact with Bitey. Introducing us to his characters so we can understand what they are, what they do, if there are others, etc. Here you just slapped some characters on a screen, made them do something unpredictable (devouring him, squishing blue poop) and then ended it with a still frame.
Potential is there, keep it up!