Honestly...
I thought it was pretty good. Like most others, I will point out that it did seem fairly similar to to Brackenwood, but I'm not about to knock you for that. The fact that it looks so similar without actually being it is a good sign. It means that you have some talent. I hope to see other works from you, but I advise you stay away from things such as this without telling what inspired, otherwise, people are going to just slap on negative reviews, because, sadly, most people on NG are sort of dicks.