Cute
I liked it, but the animation was choppy in some places. Work at it a bit, and maybe you'll have something. Maybe a dialog, or something to make a bit of a plot. Good job, though.
Reviews for "Trains"
I'd give it a 3/5
I liked the bizarreness of the graphics and the smooth animations but what I didn't like was that there were no special events to watch, so I couldn't see a point to it. But still the flash was cool but could still be improved alot more.
MorrowDays responds:
luckily for you... you can give a 3/5!
thanks :)
Eeehhh...
Cute animation...simple and enjoyable to look at. I love the wiggly transitions. I don't particularly see a point to it, but it doesn't really seem like it's striving to have one, and so works somehow.
But the music is....just...no. I'm sorry, I get that it's trying to be cute and minimalistic, but it just comes across as grating and annoying almost instantly.
MorrowDays responds:
haha thanks man.
people are pretty divided on the music thing, I can see how it would get to people's nerves.
so does boys noize though, I love that stuff but it bugs loads of folks. :)
moo
smooth, shiny, irrelevant.
IMO...
I thought it was well designed... but pro and cons come with everything so..
Pro's
1. Music- The fact that you make your own music is amazing. And that song that you put in the flash is something I would expect to hear on a train. Very soothing and calm. Fit perfectly.
2. Drawing style- I'm not sure if this is how you always draw or animate but I love the kind of abstract feeling to it. Where nothing really physically connects together but the bond is obvious.
Con's
1. UGH!- I hate hate hated how in one of the begining scenes the color of his head was almost identical to that of the sky. So it looked like a body without a head just standing there. Very annoying.
2. Purpose- Well I do thing I understand what you were trying to accomplish (nothing crazy action packed. a simple calming relaxing train ride) I do believe it could have used something a little more. I can't put my finger on it but it was lacking something like... umm.. "jazz hands" if you get the meaning.
All in all I really enjoyed the music and the flash. The way the face lit up when the train was comming in. I really like your style and I look forward to seeing you improve and create more wonderful flashes. ok im gonna go watch this again!!
t1gg
MorrowDays responds:
uhh
I blame monitor colors!
so THERE!
lmao yeah his face was pretty close to the green, I do agree.