keep trying
for this being your first time inflash, you did a pretty decent job. you just made it very choppy and slow which you should work on. don't try to make it slow to make it longer, that just messes up with the finished work. I can't tell you much since i'm just an visual artist and have no clue bout flash, but i'm sure i did more justice with the post then most that didnt really help. I really think you should pratice more in flash and get to know it better maybe even do very short simple flashes to get the basics down and help improve yourself. Keep working at it and referr to people for help and totruails for help if you need to. there is no shame in asking for help...i know some people are bitches about that. but anyway, good job and work hard on the next one. i liked the ending, despite not having no music, it was real good. it followed pretty easy and didn't have the mess up of 'long arms or weird anatomy'. try to follow up with the music if it can't be helped, then don't worry. with pratice you will be rewarded with great skills. Oh and for those asses that just chalked this up as 'shit', don't listen...they are just bitches and really don't have talent and have to diss on others to make their selfs feel better. sorry for the long read but i thought it might help. :D
ps, feel free to consort me any time. i'm very helpful with things.