Could Improve
It was good but there are lot's of things you could improve on. The quality of you're drawing, the sound effects cut off straight away after the action that happens, and their movement is a bit weird. But if you keep trying and improve you're animations will be kick ass.
OK but,,,
I liked the animation. The colours were really good, and it was a good pointer about not using the highest quality. What prevents me from giving this a 9 or 10/10 is the sound effects. They were kind of cheesy and I think you could have honestly chosen some better ones. It would have made the movie seem a bit more refined.
3/5
7/10
ill take that into consideration, thanks for the review :)
Hmmmm....
The sound died randomly towards the end and whilst you put a good amount of detail in places, you could spend a bit more time increasing the frame rate. Otherwise, a perfectly good pointless fight in a forest.
yeah, had some technical things. actionscript is very confusing to me right now.
thanks for the review.
Your FIRST flash?!
I suspect bs! lol :P
This was just too good for a first time! The animation and art quality in general was very well done. Though the frame rate seemed a little jumpy at times, it didn't effect the greatness of the flash overall. You had some exteremely well done action sequences, my favourite in particular had to be where the main character splits the big guy in half.
One little glitch I noticed (though I can't say I know how to fix it) is that your background music track stops and doesn't automatically loop when it gets to the end.
Great work though!
I look forward to seeing more from you!!
haha, well I have done art in the digital form before, so it wasnt too hard to
draw since I'm accustomed to the tablet. but thank you! theres a few
technical things I need to fix, but thanks for the review!