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Reviews for "Edwin Ep01"

Wouaohh!

At first it was a little hard to figure out the 'mood' of the series, but then you started with some jokes and i got a bunch of chuckles.
I liked the characters design. you could work a little more on the tweens, they're okay but sometimes the movement looks a little 'square' (i have tried 'complex' tweens and i know they're not very funny to make, but they make it look 'better').
Oh well, i'm looking forward on the series!
Also, congrats on the 4th place... Maybe it wasn't the best day to submit something, but trophies are just...trophies.

Kieran-s responds:

Lol, thanks for the advice. Also yeah, maybe not the best day to post it, but I didnt think it would matter. No biggy.

Awesome!

Waiting for that episode 2 now!
Nice characters, adding little natural movements (like putting on the coat) really add to the life of the characters- just letting you know that your details are noticed and appreciated!
5 & 9
Also your eye movements are really smooth, probably a dumb questiong but are you tweening them?

Kieran-s responds:

I fbf all movements that arent too slow, otherwise it would take too long. Yes thats including the eyes. Also, I'm very glad to hear that people notice the little details, putting the jacket on took me a bajillion frames. Thanks.

Its not bad

Loved it

I thought it would be shitty emopires romanticisms

But I was wrong, thank you for that.

Kieran-s responds:

Haha, thats fine. No twilight-ness around here whatsoever....thank god.

I only have one complaint aobut this video

The voice acting was a bit on the shabby side, add in more emotion and make it seem less like you're reading it and this will be a great piece of work. ^_^ Good job for what you are doing, and thank you for not going along with the sparkly-fucken' vampires and vampire omance trend that's going around. ^_^