awsomeness!!!
its serious yet funny
Reviews for "Edwin Ep01"
NICE ONE.
This was a really good, and particularly good being that it's a first episode. The simplicity of the style was made up for by the use of textures on everything, which I really love when it's used tastefully. There's a lot of potential here for a great series, and I really do hope you keep up with it.
Kieran-s responds:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I gotta quit feeding on those smokers
This was a very nice flash. I especially liked the voice cast (you really went out of your way to get a wide variety of actors) not to mention that the animation (while fairly simplistic) really worked well, and the humor wasn't too bad either.
Wouaohh!
At first it was a little hard to figure out the 'mood' of the series, but then you started with some jokes and i got a bunch of chuckles.
I liked the characters design. you could work a little more on the tweens, they're okay but sometimes the movement looks a little 'square' (i have tried 'complex' tweens and i know they're not very funny to make, but they make it look 'better').
Oh well, i'm looking forward on the series!
Also, congrats on the 4th place... Maybe it wasn't the best day to submit something, but trophies are just...trophies.
Kieran-s responds:
Lol, thanks for the advice. Also yeah, maybe not the best day to post it, but I didnt think it would matter. No biggy.
Awesome!
Waiting for that episode 2 now!
Nice characters, adding little natural movements (like putting on the coat) really add to the life of the characters- just letting you know that your details are noticed and appreciated!
5 & 9
Also your eye movements are really smooth, probably a dumb questiong but are you tweening them?
Kieran-s responds:
I fbf all movements that arent too slow, otherwise it would take too long. Yes thats including the eyes. Also, I'm very glad to hear that people notice the little details, putting the jacket on took me a bajillion frames. Thanks.