BeeGees song was good.
Too short. The thing at the end, the cutesy thing, get rid of it. Add more to the main story, have the guy walk further and do more before breaking it off. That guy chasing the light was interesting, the rest of it. no. Better without the stuff and the end. Yeah. Definitively.
Yeah I should , thanks for helpful review.
Nice try at a first animation
However, it's not at all entertaining. Try having something that makes the viewer want to continue watching, like humor, or some kind of story. The animation isn't completely terrible, but it could be a lot better. Keep trying.
and I will.