It's very short O_o
It looks very nice for a first try, but the loading is longer than the video ^^
Reviews for "KF : first submission"
Klaineks responds:
Sad true ^^. Beside , thanks.
nice
I like it a lot. it's pretty good!
Klaineks responds:
Thanks , just what i need to start making others.
not bad
-especially for a first animation, cute and fun, although i didn't get y the moonwalk guy had such weird lettring in his speach bubble 0.o
p.s. i completely disagree with wascalebrena, the ending made the movie, it was the best point of humor and wat stuck it all together, it would hav just been stupid otherwise.
Klaineks responds:
True , have nothing to disagree. That was the most hardest movie scene to make. But I have to say that wascalabrena were talking abaut story moral... but anyway ,thanks for review
Hm, that guy looks familiar...
For a first flash, not bad! Obviously, quite a few faults, which I shall now address:
1) File size. Here's a tip: use Audacity (free program), Window's Sound Recorder, or some other sound-editing program to clip the songs you used. You importing the songs in their entirety is what caused the file size to be over 8MB. (They were hi-quality songs, yes) Another option is to use shorter songs from NG's very own Audio Portal.
2) Graphics. Okay, yeah, it's my :the game: character, which is deliberately simple. But the backgrounds were quite plain, especially the coloured one. Use gradients for the sky, and blur white blobs to create clouds! Also try to add shadows for realism.
3) Animation. It's choppy, but forgivable for a first submission. No one's rushing you, but when you feel confident enough, be sure to try higher frame rates. (fps: frames per second) At least you actually attempted a walk cycle, unlike my hopping guys. Just try to add more inbetween frames, but not any more than you can handle. (before the animation goes from choppy to glitchy) Lastly, even though this is completely unnecessary, a few flare effects would make the shining light look a lot cooler.
Anyway, not bad for a first animation, and I must say I'm kinda happy that someone liked :the game: enough to make an animation starring the 'main' character. Thank you!
~Nutcasenightmare
Klaineks responds:
Thanks , I can use ure review as manual or tutorial ^^. Gonna try to fix those glitches and chompiness , beside glad that grait animator like you (I think u've been interested only because i've used ur character for flash animation ) finded this flash and written such long review to say his opinion. Thanks for your time.
Nice
Not bad for your first submission. And besides, I LOVE THE MOONWALK. I also love that song. What's the name of that?
Klaineks responds:
Main theme - The BeeGees - staying alive (staying in light)
End - Michael Jackson - Smooth criminal