I die laughing at the description. Anyway, I am not a good commentator so I'll give out whatever comes to my mind... Well you don't have to read my silly comment if you find it too harsh or doesn't make sense.
Strengths - Choir arrangement always has the upper hands in your musical 'weaponry'. Same goes for brass. I really like the narration of this track. Lord Samulis will not be pleased...
Weakness - Length of the track. There isn't enough time for each section to flourish throughout the track. I don't know if you really intended to make climax but if you do it doesn't work out really well.
I quite disappoint that this track isn't quite reflecting your full ability to knock out the opponents. Many of your older tracks work way beyond what I heard in here. Why is that?
Just sayin'! Like I said, you don't really have to read my silly words! Good day, sir.