Rhino=LOL
had to give you a 9 just cuz of the Rhino...lol Jenga
Reviews for "There Was This One Time"
good work
I like this work you have done and a 10 and 5 you will get
Another Great piece of work
This was funny and different. Great job, loved the characters.
Does Chris Niosi have two profiles, one as Kirbopher and the other as Neo-C. Strange, not a bad idea though.
Alright.
Well, it seems you got your TeamFourStar friends to help you voice this flash. Nice touch, I guess. It's a breath of fresh air to see something original from you. Although, the personalities of the people who voice characters in Dragonball Z Abridged seem to carry over to this. Not really much of a variety, I'd say. One problem I have always had with your cartoons is the lack of detail in the characters designs. Sure, the frame-by-frame looks pretty clean and smooth, but there is absolutely no detail on the characters body. They look like you drew them in Microsoft Paint. The characters themselves were very likable and funny. Well, that's all I can really say about this. Just put more of an effort in character designs and try to change up the personalities that your voice actors are so used to employing. Good luck on future, original productions.
NEO-C responds:
Thanks for the thoughts.
My mentality behind the lack of detail on the characters was the basic principle of them being easier to animate, with character animation being what I primarily wanted to focus on with this project in comparison to some of my other works.
Also the point behind them making use of some of their DBZA voices was because I felt they could stand on their own as an original thing. For instance, Lani's wimpy voice for Jeeta, wasn't just his "Krillin Impression", it was a voice he came up with on his own that just so happened to suit the character. Same goes for the others. I wanted to make use of those unique voices and make fleshed-out characters that could put them to a more original use.
This was funny as hell.
You gotta tell me though the voice actors, are they the TeamFourStar guys that make the DBZ abriged parody on youtube?