Nope
Didn't quite like it. It seemed far too easy to "stand out" in this contest by doing something totally different. To me, it didn't make much sense, and that's fine, as long as the jokes are good. They were not. In my oppinion, anyway.
Anyhow, I still love the way you draw arms all bent and weird. It's a bit of your own style right there. I'd say work on the material a bit. Still, my oppinion. Just thought I'd leave it here since you obviously need a bit of perspective inbetween these comments.