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Reviews for "The Invisibles"

Cool!

Like an animated comic book. I'm guessing you have nasty roommates. :3

Virgilcomic responds:

lol, not really

fantastic

a wonderful example of storytelling through animation with strong visual metaphors, and a great sense of atmosphere and mood. I especially liked the morphing of the friend character silhouettes, from hat to hair etc
I think you could do a great christopher walken impression!

Virgilcomic responds:

really? christopher walken? that's .. strange..

Great one

If your going to make a 2nd one maybe animate it or if you can't, partner with someone who can. but still Great job

Good one

As a storyteller myself, I have to say that was pretty good. Almost like a Grimm fairy tale. Congratulations sir. U have been 5'd.

The flash doesn't live up to the story.

That says less about what you made than your story-telling skills. You have a great theme here, and the voiceovers were good, but the accompanying animation seemed lacking. I had to go back and watch it to make sure I wasn't just holding it to too high a standard, but when I did, it seems to be more of a set of really great drawings with a lot of twitching text and minimal movement than a flash movie.

Great art and awesome story. Had the flash lived up to those, I'd call it deserving of first place.

Virgilcomic responds:

I am aware my animation skills are not so great which is why I stick with these animated storybook type things mostly. Thanks.