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Reviews for "The Invisibles"

Very Meaningful...

I thought it was very good because of the message behind the story. People should be able to live their own life without about moochers and people who need others to verify their own identity.
The only part I thought was odd was the bit about jumping into a latrine. Is that from personal experience?

Virgilcomic responds:

lol no, there was a story in our boy scouts about that though

wow

the story was really impressive!!

Did you read Paranoia mag. #1?

very cool. it made me think of the short story 'Passengers' from paranoia magazine, an old Heavy Metal like comic magazine. In passengers there are demons that take over everybody's body at random times all over the world.

Virgilcomic responds:

No, can't say I have, I never read that, did see the first movie and read a lot of variety of stuff, including comics, sci-fi, non fiction, etc.

Not so much

The story was interesting, but not very well written, and it seemed... choppy, and sounded like you replaced some words with words you got out of a thesaurus. Unnecessarily pompous. It wasn't read very well either. You seemed to stumble over a lot of your words, which is strange if it was your own composition. The animation was pretty lame, too. I guess I'm saying, I don't know why this is on the front page.

This looks original, nice job. :)

Good flash made here bro kudos.
The style and story is not bad, they fit each other real well.
The graphics and animations are simple and somewhat wierd but still nice.
The storytellin was good so you know your stuff, as somewhat before me I can only say keep up the good work with storytellin and team up with a more talented animator or just work on it. :)