Pretty good
The animation was pretty good, but what really makes this shine (like a few others have mentioned) is the music. Wish it was on the audio portal so I could listen to it more. But hey, at least it's in this flash, so yay for that. And yay for this entire thing! Good job. I can't think of any critiques, especially since this seems to be more of a test than anything else, so it works for its purpose. I assume. I'm rambling, so I'll stop.
I thought It was good
Nice animation, and good characters and settings. I thought it was a little slow, however. I understand if that was part of the mood you were trying to set, but at times it didn't progress at a quick enough pace.
cool
simple yet quite entertaining, good work
interesting but
i liked the animation and the message was interesting the, the rubbing out maybe could of been better but i did like the animation i especailly like the fact you did it all on a excersise book page, it made it seem more lonely to me
Liked It
It was well done, a little long though. I really like the style of this flash. I look forward to your future work.