now make a more detailed animation
great animation, try more details next time, anyway i did catched the message,it was quite simple anyway, keep it up
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Your drawing is good and your animations too, great job on that sir :) .
But, when I see that flash it's like there is no ''psychologic'' work in it =/ , no emotions... it was not so good.
Next time, try to do a good story, a plot or anything better. It's not ''finding love'' that was so ''not good'', it was just your way of showing it to us...
I'm not saying you suck, not at all :) , you have good potential, butyou have to work it, i'm sure you'll be even greater in no time, good luck and do another one fast so I can see if you get better :D .
Eh...
You're a fine animator, but:
Why did you draw the characters as if they were in a mall clothing store commercial?
The mood and music were good. Not a fan of the art or story.
i didn't like it.
the drawings and animation were fantastic, but that's not what makes a good flash. i grew to have no connection to the characters. even at the end, i had no idea who this person was or why he was looking for this girl. did they just meet right then and hook up? do they know each other? i'm sorry, but this wasn't well thought out. as a demonstration of your abilities, it's great. but as a movie trying to have a plot, s my b's.
Short and sweet.
A good case where the music complements the piece. Animation wise? It was alright; Sometimes it flows nice and others it can be a little choppy. For the most part, along with the music, it ran pretty smooth. The art could be tightened up as well. I remember a few scenes where I saw some proportion and perspective issues. Other than that, it was nice.