nicely written.
i love the plot. the cinematography (if thats the right word) is well done. very disturbing. and the jumpy text REALLY adds to that. i couldsay improve graphics, but it adds a gritty feel to the overall production thatis very nice.
Reviews for "Voyage Ep1: Departure"
very interesting......
made me want to see more, on a VERY deep level
you've intrigued me......
im interested in seeing more episodes.
L8s
Makes ye think...
I wonder if you do make a serie outta this if it'll pick up where you left it... Whenever I take another look at the ending I can't help but think your message is adressing itself to your choices in life according to how you were.... raised, or is it to parents?... I was expecting a jolly little life on the other side of that boat trip but.... ah, nope, not what I expected. My apologies for the long drawn out blabla, but this is deep, and this comes from a cold man, so, congratulations. I'm no expert on flash animation so I won't start givin' tips about that! Cheers!
Wow...
This flash has a very dark story in it, and I would really like if you continued it, and started tying up some strings (and making new ones of course). Who was that guy in the sky for example? Anyway, I can't give you full score because of the animating, it lacked a bit of skill and wasn't completely fluid. Still very good, so keep animating!
*Bows*
Surreal and dark, the animation was a bit rough but i really like your style, and as you said in your description it is an experimental flash.
I look for the next installment.