I REALLY LIKED IT!
I THOUGHT IT WAS ENTERTAINING. I ESPECIALLY LIKE THE TANGLED CHIBI. HES MY FAVORITE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
I REALLY LIKED IT!
I THOUGHT IT WAS ENTERTAINING. I ESPECIALLY LIKE THE TANGLED CHIBI. HES MY FAVORITE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Great! Glad you liked it. :)
Hmm
For a first attempt its not horrible, and you took the time to animate that red guys head frame by frame which is promising. But yeh, just keep practicing i guess.
Sure, I will.
Pretty Good for It's Kind
I liked how even though you used simple drawings in the flash you still included movement suggestions, change in music at points, and action sounds. Keep up the good work.
Cool, thanks! They are supposed to look like that.
Not bad for a beginner
However, I'd just like to point out there are plenty of beginning voice actors, who will join anything for exp! As to the toon, the heads are good, but I very much recommend some work on the bodies, rather a turn off.
Really? I think the bodies match the heads just fine. :) Besides, those are just the default bodies.
could be better!
You have a good idea on which you could improve on!
My main tip would be get some vocie acctors! it will bring the characters alive! i dont like how the text is set out! and some of it moves to fast to read!
Yeah, thats what a lot of people tell me. I'll have to find a way to fix it or atleast put in a rewind button. But for now you would just have to go back manually if you miss something.