bool, i mean cool
geez, how did I mispell that?
anyways, alwthought pretty sweet, those flash skillz look pretty primitive even for me (and i haven't even submited anything yet :P) but still nice
Reviews for "Leave Your Brain Behind"
KidneyThief responds:
Kind of defeating yourself there aren't you, mind you every single frame here is hand drawn. I agree with everyone who has criticized where the animation is a bit rough, as that is exactly the kind of review I am looking for so I can improve, but I wouldn't consider primitive to be the right word. Perhaps you should animate a little yourself before issuing such a statement. I would consider my "Abstract.com" submission to be "primitive."
interesting
Pretty boring if you ask me. When U said leave your brain behind I was expecting something horror or tripping. This is just a Rorschach test. What do you see in the inkblot? Nothing.
KidneyThief responds:
I saw a cookie...
Very impressive
~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, i like that it was all black and white but you should think about adding just abit of color here and there
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation.
~~OVERALL~~
great flash
~X~
KidneyThief responds:
Thanks for the review! I love black and white, but I know what you mean about the color. I think I may start experimenting with it. Great review thanks a bunch!
Lacking in the technical aspect
I would suggest a higher FPS rate (maybe 17+). Also, it looks like it was done with a mouse, which was distracting because the lines were so shaky (but I give you props because mouses are hard to animate with). I understand what you were trying to achieve but it lacked the neatness and flow required to create a piece like that. Keep trying but this didn't exactly cut it for me (not that I really matter).
3/5
6/10
KidneyThief responds:
Nope no way, mouses can go to hell. I am working with a tablet, a small one but I love it. On the contrary I believe the technical aspect you are looking for would have been achieved with a mouse. However I wasn't aiming for that technical aspect. Some parts do need smoothing though, particularly the transitions in my opinion.
meh.
not too bad. a bit pointless but i think that was the intention. 6 stars for origionality but a bit short.
KidneyThief responds:
Short but sweet. Thanks for the review