Boring and predictable
First of all, terrific animation. Really good job. You're a very talented animator. The script, direction, and sound, though, were not great. The whole thing was painfully predictable and boring as a result. At the beginning, once you know there's a kid and flowers, you know what's going to happen, but it still goes on for a long time. Needs editing at the beginning big time. The end was also extremely predictable.
The sound effects didn't really meld with the flash. What I mean by that is that each one SEEMED like a sound effect, and not a sound that was really happening. That's mainly because of the quality of the sounds, I think, but some different mixing could have helped also.
In my opinion, this is a boring and predictable story. with really stellar animation work. I look forward to future submissions, but I hope they have a better pace and story.