good, not great
I really enjoyed this movie. Unfortunately, some of the most vital aspects need improvement.
Animation was good. Sloppy, but it seemed stylized.
Sound was good quality, well recorded. The narrators voice in the beginning was inappropriate for the subject matter though. A voice like that should be saying "Gee golly goo willickers!". Judging from what was actually said in that intro, I imagine a more cynical, less enthusiastic voice, like Edward Norton at the beginning of Fight Club.
Finally the writing needs a lot of work. When you're working with comedy, you try too hard to throw drama into the mix, and when you're working with drama you try to get a cheap laugh. It's ok to work in both genres throughout a single movie, but try to define them more. The way it is sounds like you can't make up your mind as to whether the characters are being silly or serious. If you need pointers, send me a script and I'll show you whats going on. I'd love to collaberate :)
Other than that, this is the start of an epic series. I will be following your work closely.