good job
very good story line
nice song
animations are a little bit slow
he was just sliding instead of running
no eyes
nice style
overall i give an 8 and a 4
Reviews for "The Last Fight"
Like whoa...
That was... amazing. You drew all that by hand? Newgrounds needs more quality flashes like this one. It's almost good enough to get a 10 from me (which I don't give out often), I just have 1 little problem. A play button would've been nice. Other than that this is flawless, and it moved me. Brother vs Brother, if that doesn't move you, then there's something wrong with you.
poor...
sorry, but the only animation was short transitions from basically tweens. Not only that, but your characters were simply empty catalysts to a poorly thought-out storyline. You need to make sure that every frame your characters are dynamicly moving, or else you end up wiht a picturebook animation. Good art, despite the fact that the style was a little too simplistic in parts. (especially since this was done by hand) I wouldnt complain about the storyline and tween-esque animation if it wasnt for the fact that no true fighting took place. The whole time they were doing cheap dash strikes, with a light burst to show they hit. That is a poor choice, and it showed clearly.
great
it could have been longer and have more background story like parts before the fight, not counting the flashbacks.
it was alright
TokingMonking you have no idea how much work keepwalking would have had to put into this drawing each frame on paper.
But onto the review-
Music choice- Great 5/5 I thought the music fit pretty good with the theme and mood of the Animation
Animation- Good 4/5 The animation for doing it on paper was pretty good, not the best I've seen but deserving of at least some praise ;)
Theme/story- Good 8/10 I believe the whole brother versus brother thing is over done but you did a great job of animation it