hmmm
nice madness submission, the sound effect of the helicopter sounded wrong though, more like a truck or some stramge machinery or something, there are a lot of free sfx sites, look around, you'll find a good one. Other that that, great work, fun to watch.
Thanks man.
Not bad, nice critique
I like how you did an animation on the iraq war *I'm assuming here from the characters* but some things need to be changed.
A. Your characters bob up and down, to represent breathing, yet they bob too much. It looks like they are wheezing when they are standing still, are they asthmatics? lol
B. Your snipers need to be a little more realistic. They are always covered, somehow, and they still themselves before a shot.
C. Your helicopter animation was a little...stale. You did well with the men *assuming here, nothing against females* but the helicopter was very...blocky. The stairs that dropped, just seemed to appear.
Great job so far though, keep it up!
Thanks alot for your sujestions I will keep that in mind.
Madness is...
...an artform which requires more hyperactivity than your flash has provided...I would like to suggest that you go and study the classics of Madness works and rethink this...overall it did contain many elements of Madness day just did not hit the mark for me.
I will do that for sure thanks man.
music
i liked the first song from metallica