BRUTAL!!
It's kinnda counter-strike like. The ak-47 sound was from cs. but nontheless it rocks, altough it shoud run smoothly. Ps: nice music.
Reviews for "The madness of war.."
Shade-Productions responds:
Thanks man.
Sweet Madness.
A lot of "madness" submissions comes onto newgrounds and most are terrible; it's a very hard act to follow because it requires excellent animation skills. Naturally I expected this to be another madness failure, however, truth be told it wasn't bad at all.
Firstly the graphics. They're not "wow!" or "fuck yeah!", but rather "humm... pretty good". Your animation is chopping at times but your weapons - blood effects have been drawn very well with detail and design. Nothing shows any signs of amateur creation and although not absolutely stunning, it all fits together very nicely, which is surprising, considering the majority of submissions in this category.
Sounds are placed very adequately and the music choice is acceptable, although almost any rock or heavy metal track suits "madness". All I can say is "well done" on these grounds. Gun sounds are slightly varied but you might want to include screams or explosions to add to the atmosphere.
Again I must emphasise that fact your attention to detail is superb. However it falls ever so slightly short of the best works of Madness because your animation looks slightly sticky and you didn't reach a good conclusion to a story. I would be willing to watch part 2 and review so notify me should you make a sequel.
Your attempts are definitely noteworthy though and a tribute to the madness has been made successfully. You deserve a congratulations from newgrounds and wishes of good luck in future productions. *
{ 8 } - Respectable.
* Madness is spelt with two S's.
Shade-Productions responds:
Thanks alot man I really needed some feedback like this. I'm glad you didn't hate it lol. And I'm planning the sequel to be bad ass and fast and not choppy at all. my animation is good in this but sometimes i would be have a off day. Thanks for your feed back its helping alot dude. =)
Oh ya and after i submitted it i realized I typed madness with one s lol.
Not bad, nice critique
I like how you did an animation on the iraq war *I'm assuming here from the characters* but some things need to be changed.
A. Your characters bob up and down, to represent breathing, yet they bob too much. It looks like they are wheezing when they are standing still, are they asthmatics? lol
B. Your snipers need to be a little more realistic. They are always covered, somehow, and they still themselves before a shot.
C. Your helicopter animation was a little...stale. You did well with the men *assuming here, nothing against females* but the helicopter was very...blocky. The stairs that dropped, just seemed to appear.
Great job so far though, keep it up!
Shade-Productions responds:
Thanks alot for your sujestions I will keep that in mind.
hmmm
nice madness submission, the sound effect of the helicopter sounded wrong though, more like a truck or some stramge machinery or something, there are a lot of free sfx sites, look around, you'll find a good one. Other that that, great work, fun to watch.
Shade-Productions responds:
Thanks man.