Great Effort
You use some really great techniques, most evident in your "camera" work. And I am always a fan of seeing frame by frame as opposed to "cut out" flash animation. Your "pencil" still needs some work, but that's really all about consistantly sitting down with your pad and drawing. Keep it up. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
IT had a great promise in it.
but didnt deliver it quite so well.
The animation was great (hats off)
But few things kept bugging me, to be more precise the story telling, the voice wasnt the best possible unless you crank up the volume so high the paintings start falling off. secondly the text is way too granulating(like in old movies) and the font is one of the worse ever used for story telling.
othervise a good animation.
not bad
its not so great
blah
not good.
dum
nothing even happend
your meant to press the play button.