Pretty clever
I must say, I was skeptical after the first one, but after watching this and comparing the two, I think this is going to be quite series. It's obviously one of the more original works I've seen lately.
My only concern is that you're going to concentrate more on dialogue and less on character movements, expressions, and other sounds to tell a story. There's a surprising amount of story one can make just with pantomime and sound effects, and I really hate to see this series turn into a talking-heads, plot summary project. I really think you had something going in the first episode with no dialogue and no descriptions; only jagged editing and sounds.
If however, dialogue is absolutely necessary for the the plot to take hold, keep it to a minimum as you've done so far.