This flash was very interesting. Normally I get tired of pixel movies relatively fast, but this had quite a lot of special effects that made it more enjoyable. I was surprised at the 'random' ending - that being the first ending I chose - because it was much more random than I had expected. The sound and visual effects were definitely the best parts of the movie, and made what could've been a lackluster Mario spoof a lot better.
I guess the main critique I have is the spelling of the rare dialect areas. Running your grammar and spelling through Word probably would've helped your score. Also, while I enjoyed the random ending, the endings in which someone won didn't have much in them; just a few seconds of winning. You definitely seem like an experienced pixel animator, though.
I'd probably have to see your other animations before I could say whether you've improved, but all things considered, this was a very good flash.
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