Win.
This was truly epic for the following reasons
1) Your style is ridiculously cool and original
2) The suspense you built in the story was great. MORE!
3) Sound was great
4) I want not only to see what happens in the story, but i want to see your style develop
As previously mentioned, the subtitles could do with a tweak - but to be honest....after watching that flash, it just seems like nitpicking! So 10/10
Awesome job....... MORE!
wayyyyy to long
its was such a good idea, but you took way to long to execute it. The entire video was boring until the part where the door broke down. I would recommend looking over your storyboard and see if any of it seems just the slightest bit boring, because when it comes to flash movies, you have to keep people on their toes.
WHOA!!
that.. was... cool, just cool...
Wow
Well that was really nice :O
Also you maybe have to fix you subtitles (reducing their size, and spelling error, just that). The plot was really nice, I'm waiting for the next episose. Great Work!
interesting
cant wait for next episode