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Reviews for "Don't eat that Sandwich!!"

Ehhhh.....

Ehh, three for effort, but -7 for stupidity

Just a bit too slow...

I think the main problem with this movie is the pacing of the humor. A lot of the jokes and whatnot would have been really funny if not out-right hilarious if only it were paced faster. The short cop's voice was also rather annoying. The artwork and style was done well, nothing was visually annoying.

Overall, it was an alright Flash movie, just that the pacing should have been a bit faster, in my opinion.

ok then

i agree with disease666 but it was funy somewhat

What the heck?

What are all of you people below this review whining about (except tieton; he said this had potential) ! This is a very good cartoon that took a while to animate, has great voices, has some decent slapstick humor, and should be appreciated just because it came out decent! Have some respect people!

sarthius responds:

Thanks. :)
Maybe not my best work but not horrible I think. And its's always nice to have someone appreciate the effort even if the end result was not "A" or even "B" material.

well...

the animation was good but the plotline needs thikening so it basicly wasted my time

sarthius responds:

I do this cartoon for you people. everyone here. If it sucks let me know what you want different. Email me if you ideas on what would be better, if I can do it I will.