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Reviews for "Exile Preliminary 3"

interesting

ur prty talented at art and animation and the voices and lip synchronization were also good. the flash itself was great.

However, i kinda dont like the plot, or really, just the anachronism. i find it too strange to have futuristic hovercrafts and lands ruled by monarchy in the same time period. but im prty sure a lot of other ppl DO like this, so i wont be so judgmental about that.

RiverJordan responds:

I was bringing it up on a different review but i'll write it here too:
BASICALLY: The setting is exactly as I'd like it to be. It may seem weird to have the monarchy and hovercrafts, but that creates an atmosphere of originality (In my opinion at least :P ), simply because its... different. =D
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it ^_^

nice:D

the animations seems kinda auquard and with littel life, the voise acting isent the best but its okay, your nusick choiose is good and you know when 2 play and pause it and last but not least the story is good and is told wery smooth

Keep practicing

You realy improved since the first 1, but i thing you should try to improve some things. Mainly shadow/light effects, human anatomy, proportion and gender differences. You have some skill there and it would be a waste not use it. I suggest you find something to copy human positions, like a wooden doll (they are realy usefull sometimes!) Everything else made it worth my time ;)

RiverJordan responds:

Thanks sir! Yeah first i wanted to concentrate on learning FBF animation (since chapter 2) and after this one i've been working on my art alot. The series is only going uphill from here!

Not bad.

Having not seen the other chapters I can only comment on this movie. The animation was fair, the dialog was a little too snarky for my tastes, and the music was average. An average offering that could be helped if the drawings were as ambitious as the camerawork. You have some really nice shots in this movie keep at it.

ummm i dont know has tell you

mne grath work but change the level in your graphics make real people is hard see it make comic ,anime or another typer more easy XD.

i dont know that warrior has a girl if dont talk xD

RiverJordan responds:

I'm pretty sure I understand what you're saying, this is kind of a mix of anime/ north american comics I think. But i'm going to keep on improving these graphics without switching styles, they will become likeable ^_^