this is like if sex had a child with sex :)
how ever, i am biased :P
Reviews for "Exile Preliminary 3"
cool alot better
this is better than the 2nd with animation, with scrip, and its also a bit longer than usual ^_^
NICe
I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next episode! (:
you're definitely good at animation
I give you a 10 because your animation is so fluid and enjoyable to the eye. You did a great job but the voice acting was boring and you didn't have subtitles. Keep flashing if this is what you love doing because you could go far.
So now what?
I really liked the video and music. The animation is very good and the art still is... How do I say this... Different but still works really well with the music and animation style. The only problem I have with the series so far is that 3 episodes in, all I know is, Parents killed, Royal Guards, Attack Coming, Hovercraft, 46 stories, etc.
The next one should advance the plot a little. It seems like your trying to leave "cliffhangers" to grab our attention however, you NEED to advance the plot, make it cool and interesting. Then, glory to you. - Thanks for the video btw.
-Shuturma
RiverJordan responds:
Blair man I'm working hard on advancing the plot, the cliffhangers are there yes but really each chapter is 5-7 minutes long, its tedious to make something that long and still keep it exciting! Plus this one didn't have much of a cliffhanger compared to the others.