Quite Good
Short, actually, very short, but quite cool, i like the magic and madness feature, ill give it a 5/10
Reviews for "How Shall He Die 1 - M136"
Murad136 responds:
Thank you very much. Good to know the ones that you liked!
i love muffins
this was some good stuff
Chicken nuggets are good and waffles with red lobster bisquits
make another game
Too simple
I think that this piece needs to be taken further, preferably by developing how blood splatters really work, then adding this to your piece. Without wanting to sound harsh about your drawing style, the stick figures looked bad, but it really could have done with using the madness characters if you could draw them so well. Concentrating on how you draw your protagonists will really help the look of the flash.
More methods of killing could be useful - Acme rockets, Anvil dropped on head, torn to shreads by wild dogs, that sort of thing, possibly even the Monty Python foot off Doom, that descends from the top of the screen to crush the whole scene, just for a laugh, perhaps.
That's just a few ideas for you, so that you can hopefully take it further.
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Murad136 responds:
Haha, thanks for the ideas! I never thought of the funny aspect! Well, I'll be honest, I didn't really try hard on the stick firgures, because if I did it would have taken me 1 extra week, and I was anxious to release this one! Thanks for the review, everything has been taken to mind!
Um, no
For something that supposedly took long to finish this falls way short. Music sucks. Only 4 choices? Sucks! Could have been way better. EPIC FAIL!
Murad136 responds:
Wow your a dick, you don't think it deserves 0? Isn't that a bit harsh, I really tried aswell. It's all about practice I'm not like other artists on Ng, you ever tried flash, do you know how hard it is?