Reviews for Stick Man Game Test

[fakeshock]

From an effort fan.

I don't know nothing about actionscripting, but I can tell, this is a great work) Your first try, superb, I even had fun )) I'm an effort fan. Admire you for uploading this thus you probably knew there would be abusive comments) and I pretty darn good job dealing with them) Now, heres what... DON'T STOP! many tallented artist were stuck on their firs work and never went foreward. Don't do that, push foreward. Good luck!

mattuiop responds:

when at the minute im working on a better game than this, same charactor but alot more adventure! :D

[AethosGames]

Five for the effort.Here are some tips.

You should probably playtest your game a little more. You fall through the floors a lot, because there are problems with shapeflag hittests. First, it looks like you used thickened lines for the ground. Use rectangles instead. Also, with true gravity, the farther you fall, the more pixels you skip per frame. increase the framerate to around 50, and use a gravity modifier. For example:

var grav: Number = *whatever you wnt your gravity constant to be*;
var gravity: Number = 0;

then:

onClipEvent(enterFrame){
gravity += grav
}

to prevent him from falling through the floor, use something like this(alter for your instances):

onClipEvent(enterFrame){
while(_root.ground.hitTest(_x,_y,true )){
_y += grav;
gravity = 0;
}

If you alter this correctly to tailor your flash, it should prevent you from falling through your floor (if you use rectangles for the floor, because no matter the thickness of the line, its width is still only 1 pixel).

-Psyflash

mattuiop responds:

thanks for the help, that should work!

[Lakkam]

Shit

Ok let's cut it to the chase: this is nothing, not even a simple game, there is nothing achieve, this SUCKS. The physics are awful (a geriatric donkey would do better actionscript then you in this flash) and there are no graphics too (ha lines, sorry).

So for your first submission i'd suggest you REALLY take some time and read more tutorials to do a REAL game. Even a crappygame but please a game.

mattuiop responds:

i was just trying out actionscript, btw read the comment i did, it is my first though!

[crazypieguy95]

Great for first!

This is a good start for your first!! You didn't pick something too challenging or easy. But sometimes the stick guy kept falling through the platforms. Try to add color and a goal. Maybe enemies if you want too. I have definitely seen a lot worst "firsts".

mattuiop responds:

thanks for the support!
ill try that next time!

[ShusuiHayasafan]

i fell throgh all

of the platforms o get 1

mattuiop responds:

read the comment i did, it is my first though!