Needs Improvement
Some of the fighting is great, and you really got the element of the bullets down. You could feel the bullets being fired.
However, you really need to improve on the physics. How the bodies fell and how the characters moved was jerky and un-realistic.
Also, you need more sounds instead of recycling the same ones over and over.
Nice but...
I like what your doing here and you've got the gunplay down to a pretty good science but one thing you are lacking in would be the Melee combat. It feels rather sluggish and clumsy, you should if you can work on increasing maybe the frames of your flash or otherwise making things a little smoother. Still good stuff and better then what I could do
you don't know how to spell wrap
or something
Not that good
Sorry mate, I didn't find this flash very good. There were a few things bothering me;
- Choppy 3-D animation.
- Character design was not original at all
- Way too linear battlescenes
If one of the yellow guys got shot, the death animation looked the same every single time. Furthermore the very first battlescene was just some guys standing and shooting, nothing spectecular or interesting. It was boring, even.
The only original character design I saw was that from the bad guy. Although it wasn't spectecular either.
Furthermore I think your primary improvement should be the animation itself. It was very choppy. There were a few smooth parts, but overall you could easily see you simply lined up several "drawings" in a row.
The series isn't bad, trust me, and I would never be able to do what you did, but in my point of view it just isnt that good.
Thanks your review...
Plot?
Your animation is great, but is it just random shooting and fighting? You really need a plot, and correct me if their is some plot.