Aaaaaaahhhh
Imagine how much more epic it would be if you had the means to recruit an actual choir on this song...haha
The intro->lead guitar was great. The part at 1:27 reminds me of Radiohead to the highest degree, by the way.
Have you considered using a clean electric guitar rather than an acoustic one on this track? Since you already have the one melody type thing played on an acoustic sounding string instrument, making the strumming electric might distinguish it a bit more, since it sorta just fades away after the onset. Which might be what you're going for. You are a master at blending, so...
The drums were kick-ass. The cymbals had a great tone to them
I liked how you dropped stuff out at 4:25 and at the end. Though the end feels a little lackluster and not so polished, mainly how the bass cuts out. I think keeping the straight 8th notes for a few more bars, but actually having them fade instead of cutting out completely would do the trick.
And now you have to review some heavy metal...ha!
You said it, I clicked the link...Do Forest_0_Peril (Please :D)
Nice work, never finished, just put aside.