MMM...
Unoriginal, distorted sprite, and the music reminded me of The Land Before Time.
Try to create your own storyline, try not to badly stretch the spirtes, use your own voice or others for audio, not word bubbles... and you might have a good animation going... maybe try to look for moving sprites so they dont slide across the screen.
what he said
Yes plz fix it, and make part 2 soon
Try not to spoil too much for the halo noobs
3/5
Hmm...
You have a concept for the story, I can see that, however you used horrible sprites for the characters. Try Google searching for some better sprites, and continue to work on your animation. I would like to see this Flash be continued, but with the quality enhanced. Also, see if you can find Voice Actors, it adds to the value of the Flash.
~CelestOrion