Needs some work
You need to work on your script a little bit more, and also
WTF there are halo sprites?
Anyways, try to take a little more time with your animations. They will do better if you put lots of time and effort into them.
Reviews for "Halo Flash Part 1"
MMM...
Unoriginal, distorted sprite, and the music reminded me of The Land Before Time.
Try to create your own storyline, try not to badly stretch the spirtes, use your own voice or others for audio, not word bubbles... and you might have a good animation going... maybe try to look for moving sprites so they dont slide across the screen.
Hmm
Learn to spell and use correct grammar. "Fought" to be dead? Is that like a retarded version of thought?
Meh.