Holy shit
Your FIRST submission? This is incredible. It's rare for me to ever favorite something, or vote 5, but you've earned it. I hope you make this into some sort of webshow series or something, because it looks amazing. In my opinion, it looked and flowed just like any good japanese anime theme song. Great freakin' job!
wow, thank you very much. :D I do hope I can submit a clean cut anime/ webcomic of it...becuase I've got the drafts and roughs already. Just need the time to clean it up.
Preety Good
I dont know if you were trying to make it like a anime show intro but it felt like that. I like that since not many people do that. also i was wondering if you were gona make a series called exxcesive hapiness. i personally thionk you should.
Yes, this is an anime. The flash you've just seen is an intro to that. And yes it is called Excessive Happiness. but it will take some time to finish a flash episode. But I'm hoping I will be able to finish one
It was good
I think the biggest thing for you to do would be to up your fps and get the animation a little smoother, your art work is excellent, but the animation is slightly jerky in my opinion.
Not really a critque, but you have the characters mouths moving as if they are talking at one point, but theres no sounds or talk bubbles to tell us what they are saying, and it's slightly strange.
Good job though! Keep submitting more :O)
lol I shouldn't have done the mouth movement if i say so myself. But thank you for liking it :D
great
I loved the character design. Sometimes the backround was a little sloppy, but the character's were eye-catching enough to distract from it.
besides, It's not like I could do any better.
great
zombie gurl? nice vid it will survive.
zombie gurl? O.o