Hmmmm
***What I liked***
Well it was okay for a first try. Your getting somwhere with this. Keep on practicing man! I think you can do it!
***Improvements***
Make it longer, Don't overdo it with stick figures. And practice!
***Overall***
A good try for a first flash.
thanks i do need improvment
Your first try, not too bad
I'm gong to tell you what other users told me when they said my first submission sucked: it needs SOUND. Whether it's music, bits off the Internet, whatever, sound adds a huge amount to any piece of work on NG.
lol
you need to work on stick i sugest zooming in 800 zoom
A good concept that didn't live up...
This isn't too much better than a quick animated GIF...You need to take your time with this, make motion more fluid and looking less like random scribbles. Detail is your friend. You had a decent concept--a good old-fashioned stick-figure fight--but the lack of sound and the poor animation quality caused it to fall flat.
Just remember this for next time. Don't give up quite yet.
yeah i dont think ill be giving up yet. i mean come on, its my first vid.
yeah
not so hot
get some tunes or some sound
spend more time drawing shit thats not stick dudes
give us something man