first movie huh?
well, i'll give no stars.
at least you can use flash maker!, just keep practicing
not much to say, lol
Reviews for "owned by av"
GraphicGuy22 responds:
thanks.
Not Bad
Remember to add a loading bar and a play button, this will allow the individual to load when they want to. (It can get midly annoying if the movie starts on its own)
Try to lengthen the movie with more fighting and combat. The stick figures have a sort of style that isn't seen in many of the stick figure movies, good job there.
Add more scenary for the viewers to enjoy -> Background, doors, and maybe some tables (which could be broken?)
Your first try, not too bad
I'm gong to tell you what other users told me when they said my first submission sucked: it needs SOUND. Whether it's music, bits off the Internet, whatever, sound adds a huge amount to any piece of work on NG.
Good start!
Very good start the animation for the sticks were good. I hope that you could do much better on your other flashes!
good, but..
it would have been much better if you had put in sound. if that's too much trouble then a greater frame rate would have made it easier on the eyes. keep at it.