doood breh!
u won the newdethgroundextrememassacrematch!?
congrats. the song is pretty neat.
Reviews for "NP - Piano Sonata No. 3"
Wonderfully played.
The crescendo around 2:00~2:30 comes at a great time, but I feel you've lost your way a bit on the background notes right after it; the timing doesn't fit the piece overall and they're too deep for the soft tones you kept in your main tune.
Particularly loved 3:20~3:35, nice build-up there. Could've used sharper tones towards the end, also, but nice ending overall!
Congrats on a wonderful piece!!
cool modulations and such, pretty well played, somewhat unique feel at times.
Transitions
The alteration of different feelings is well implemented. It gives the impression of a rotating jewel. My complaint though is that none of the pieces seem to conclude, as if the jewel was meant to rotate infinitely, so that the ending feels abrupt and confusing.
ProudAardvark responds:
Cheers, so, I see what you're saying about the transition issues. I think one of the main causes is my performance; I had to record the sections with a bunch of separate takes because I ran out of time to learn how to play it. Also, I think the piece suffered a little in reducing it from orchestra & piano to just piano. Many of the phrases and textures would repeat with color changes and dialog between piano and orchestra, with the whole thing being a few minutes longer. Trying to decide now if it needs that extra length to make the phrases breathe more. Ty for the review!
not bad but this is very confused.