too short
not enough in there to tell the story..
why don't you just put them together..
it would save us all a lot of time..
this was just as disappointing as the others.
there are so many areas you can work on.
i've said it so many times i'm sure others have said it too.
try harder, much harder.. you've got a good idea, you're just not presenting it properly.
chapter 10 is 3 minutes all action
Hm..
Animation/Graphics - I can't say anything wrong with this at all really except for the lack of actual animation. Just like most of your other movies it's pretty much just like a picture and a couple of very slight movements. Nothing too great. The graphics and drawings are still getting a little better every time I see them. Good job there I guess.
Story - I can honestly say I haven't a clue what this series is about at all. The only thing I hear every time is the antichrist is doing this and doing that, blah blah... I really don't see how the story matches the animation too much.. something that really needs worked on in the future.
Audio - I think the audio in this one was really terrible. From all of the voices and all of the sound effects in general. The menu was the best sound effects. I think you need to get some voice actors and some people talented in audio to help with your series next time around.
Overall, this one wasn't very good at all. The audio was of bad quality and there wasn't too much animation at all. The cheesy humor that you tried to add really didn't help this series out at all.
C52
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Second verse, same as the first
Basic animation, devoid of plot, too quiet on the microphone work and unable to really releate to the rest of the project.
That's what I think we have hare in a nutshell, but please allow me to elaborate - there is no change of camera angles, or depth of the plotline. If you concentrated on showing us how these bits and pieces blend in together, you would be able to give us something that might actually be worthy of recognition. I'm a scriptwriter by trade on Newgrounds (well, a stat whore as well, but that's secondary, when you consider flash skills) and I think that if you worked on this, you would produce less, but vastly higher quality flash if you got a decent script laid out.
Try turning up the input volume of your microphone, as the sound effects are very quiet in this scene. We want to hear how menacing these creatures are, as they look like they should be terrifying. It's like one of the Disney huge monsters that speaks with a tiny squeaky voice - you can't help but laugh at them.
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Graphics are pretty good in this one. Even though everything is painted in very dark colours, there are still some nice details, like the lightening in the background.
Again, this chapter lacks some serious animations. That creature on top of the hill is the only thing that moves a little, everything else stands there stock-still.
The sound is a bit weird this time. While the background noises fit the scenery pretty well, we can here some big static noises when that thing on the hill is beginning to speak.
Overall, the major problems with this series continue. First of all, the chapters are too short and second, the voice acting needs some major improvements.
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Boring again.
You have proven yourseelf on the drawing side of things but you need more action. There is minimal animation, which makes me think that you didn't put a lot of effort into this. just did a movie clip of the main bug character moving around while talking. Not very hard to do at all and not intersting either.
I know your chapter 10 was a lot better but you should have thought this series through more before starting it as the episodes are too short and boring.
therefore i cant give you a high score for this
5/10
Marsupial
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