Reviews for The Last Hour: Chapter 8

[Coop]

Second verse, same as the first

Basic animation, devoid of plot, too quiet on the microphone work and unable to really releate to the rest of the project.

That's what I think we have hare in a nutshell, but please allow me to elaborate - there is no change of camera angles, or depth of the plotline. If you concentrated on showing us how these bits and pieces blend in together, you would be able to give us something that might actually be worthy of recognition. I'm a scriptwriter by trade on Newgrounds (well, a stat whore as well, but that's secondary, when you consider flash skills) and I think that if you worked on this, you would produce less, but vastly higher quality flash if you got a decent script laid out.

Try turning up the input volume of your microphone, as the sound effects are very quiet in this scene. We want to hear how menacing these creatures are, as they look like they should be terrifying. It's like one of the Disney huge monsters that speaks with a tiny squeaky voice - you can't help but laugh at them.

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[Fro]

Hm..

Animation/Graphics - I can't say anything wrong with this at all really except for the lack of actual animation. Just like most of your other movies it's pretty much just like a picture and a couple of very slight movements. Nothing too great. The graphics and drawings are still getting a little better every time I see them. Good job there I guess.

Story - I can honestly say I haven't a clue what this series is about at all. The only thing I hear every time is the antichrist is doing this and doing that, blah blah... I really don't see how the story matches the animation too much.. something that really needs worked on in the future.

Audio - I think the audio in this one was really terrible. From all of the voices and all of the sound effects in general. The menu was the best sound effects. I think you need to get some voice actors and some people talented in audio to help with your series next time around.

Overall, this one wasn't very good at all. The audio was of bad quality and there wasn't too much animation at all. The cheesy humor that you tried to add really didn't help this series out at all.

C52

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[perfect-insanity]

first laughs i've gotten out of the series

Visuals: well drawn but very little action on the screen, probably would've gotten bored with them if the movie wasn't so short, you really should consider combining some of your movies

Audio: the narrator's voice during the intro made me laugh which may not be your desired reaction but it's better than what it was in some of your previous episodes, also the subtitles should be applied to some of your other movies as well

Overall: I have the same complaints as in your last movies, too short, lack of animation, and the series reminds me of a comic book narrated panel by panel; however, I actually enjoyed watching this chapter because you've found a way to use the extreme shortness of the chapter to overcome the fact that it becomes boring after a few dozen seconds of staring at a picture, I think that was merely a fluke but still it worked, good job

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[X3cutioner]

too short

not enough in there to tell the story..
why don't you just put them together..
it would save us all a lot of time..
this was just as disappointing as the others.
there are so many areas you can work on.
i've said it so many times i'm sure others have said it too.
try harder, much harder.. you've got a good idea, you're just not presenting it properly.

Jaiba responds:

chapter 10 is 3 minutes all action

[OdHero]

Compile the story.

You should make a flash which tells all these parts in one, they're just too short to go through 1 by 1 and be entertained, imagine having to watch a film but having to change channel to watch it every minute, have it load, and play.

Also you tweened the wings poorly, they would move at the top, not on the back.
I liked your style though, if they were all in one flash I'd give higher than a 6, but this format just doesn't work.

Jaiba responds:

watch chapter 10 and you will see it's all fixed