Hmm
Yea, your story is coming along fine, but the flash isn't that well "animated", i mean the drawings are decent but it needs more movement.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 8"
Jaiba responds:
chapter 10 vast improvement. check it out
Good story, Bad Flash, too short
Terrible narrator intro... Slow, annoying, and terrible spelling and grammar for the on screen text.
The main movie is barely animated. But it is relatively well drawn.
The alien's laugh is "chewbacca *click* *click* *cluck* *click* *click*"?!! LOL!
Anyway, main complaint for all of these chapters is that they're all too short.
Jaiba responds:
i know i added a bit of humor. hey will you watch chapter 10 and review it. it's my last chapter of the season and it rocks
not too bad
not much happened though and perhaps you could improve on the voice acting
the artwork was pretty good though
Jaiba responds:
i'll promise to work on everything you suggested. hey go and check out my other new submissions. chapter 6,7,9. Chapter 7 has no reviews at all :'(